Art Class Portfolio Critique USA
Clara Lieu Art Prof & Partner
I am really impressed by all the works in this collection! Each student really went above and beyond with their imagery and especially their compositions. My eye keeps getting drawn into the still lives and through into the open ribcage, all of the work is quite impressive.
I also really enjoyed the vibrancy of the color, and the overall variety of mediums used by this class. I know when I was in high school, I always stayed in my comfort zone of watercolor and charcoal, so its really great seeing so much variety in just one class. Thank you so much for sharing with us, a job well done to Baldwin High School!
This is an amazing body of work! Each piece here has such a strong narrative and personal voice, even when dealing with traditional still-lives, and I really admire that. It is wonderful to see the students pursuing complex concepts and doing it so effectively and expressively. I love the wide exploration of techniques and blending of mediums that is taking place throughout this portfolio of work.
This class is definitely not shy of experimenting with colour and they can keep pushing the boundaries of it even further. I would encourage the students to mix and create more personal and distinctive colours, it would enhance their already strong ideas. I think it is starting to happen with the cubist still life as well as with the carved book piece and the painting with the eyes.
It is great to see the various manners in which the still-lives are playing with composition. I personally always feel that composition tends to get more tricky with abstraction and when we start building things out of our imagination as there are no physical objects to move around in different positions. I think revisiting design principles is useful in those situations. Another practice that is extremely useful is creating thumbnail sketches before starting out, allowing to experiment and having various compositions side by side for comparison.
This is an impressive body of work with bold stories, thank you for your submission!
This is definitely an art class I would have loved to have! I enjoy the range of techniques used by the students, from painting to mixed media to drawing on skin, it is really nice to see such variety. One piece in particular that caught my eye is the portrait of the girl with words on her face done in acrylic paint. It has such an evocative depth to it, that I simply admire and identify so strongly with. However, I do agree with Prof. Lieu in regards to the crown symbol, in a piece so dense with such important symbols and themes, the crown seems to distract from them, especially with the bright yellow used to highlight it. The painting overall is really compelling. Thank you for this submission!
This is a really interesting collection of artworks! There are so many different ideas, techniques, and mediums being explored by everyone, which is impressive. I really love the use of symbolism and abstraction in some of these pieces as well, and the potential stories that go along with each piece.
One thing that I gathered from these pieces is a strong presence of imagination and confidence, which is fantastic and will really help you in the future with creating. Thank you for sharing your works with us!
This body of work has been such a pleasant experience to look through! There have been several times with this class when I assume that one medium has been used, but actually it’s a totally different medium, and that’s such a cool realization! I find this happening both with the body art piece which doesn’t even look real, and the cardboard heart drawing that looks like a screen print.
I see so much variety in composition, content, and medium. These are strong points for this class. I would love to see some bold exploration with color in your group next! I see some great understanding of how neutrals work in the cubist-like drawing of skull and mannequin. I also like the complementary yellow and purple scheme going on in the image with the eyes. It might be worth doing a color mixing exercise where you mix as many different colors as you possibly can, just so you can learn to work beyond the limits of straight up tube colors.
Thank you for your class submission, there is some really beautiful and expressive work here!
What a great collection of work! I find it really exciting to see a high school class on this level experimenting so much with mixed media, and working on unconventional surfaces – from corrugated cardboard or the artist’s own skin!
What’s particularly interesting about the latter is the way the graphic style of the ink seems to almost flatten the photographed arm into a 2-dimensional image… At first glance I thought the whole thing was a drawing!
This class is really thinking outside of the box. Even the more traditional portraits and still-lives in this group have some really creative and compelling elements; whether it’s a bold color choice or a striking composition. A job well done!
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