I’m a junior in high school from California. My interests are primarily art and oil painting, design, and computer science. I have been drawing for as long as I can remember, and I took basic art classes from second grade until fifth grade. However, I continued painting and drawing at home after discontinuing classes and I feel that the years I’ve spent doing art on my own have been the most instrumental in my skills as an artist now.
As a second semester junior, I’m beginning to complete my art portfolio for college but I feel that I’m lacking certain elements such as different styles, a concentration, etc. I would like feedback on how I can improve the works I currently have and especially on what more to include and how to diversify my portfolio if necessary.
Many of the works I have now are slightly outdated and I want to start painting more now, but I don’t know what type of works I should have. It would be very helpful if I could get an idea of the types of artworks to add to my portfolio that would best demonstrate my skills.
My short term goal as an artist is to have a completed art portfolio that showcases my best work. In the long term, I hope to pursue joint computer science and art programs in college and use my skills as an artist in my future career (i.e. app designer, user interface designer etc.)”Purchase a critique or Skype consult
“Immediately what I see in your portfolio is that every single piece has been so comprehensively finished. I feel that every artwork that I’m looking at in your portfolio really has been fully resolved. Every single area of your pieces has been totally addressed and considered, and that’s actually rare for an art school admissions portfolio to show that.
It’s quite often that I will see student portfolios where they’ll have pieces that look like they’re off to a really good start, but aren’t fully resolved. You really have pushed every single piece to its ultimate potential. I don’t feel when I look at any of your artworks that anything has been left behind, that anything is really lacking, and that’s such a wonderful thing.
I think it also shows very clearly that you are a very hard worker, you have an excellent work ethic, and that you really pay attention to fully resolving all of your pieces. An art school portfolio really needs to have diversity in terms of materials and also subject matter, and you definitely have that.
When I look at all the subjects that you’re doing, there’s a huge range. For example, you have some still life images, you have some portrait images, not only that, but you also have a bunch of images that seem like they’re suggesting some kind of a narrative.
You have some pieces that are little bit more surrealistic and so what I like about your work is that it doesn’t seem like you’re doing these academic studies of things. It seems like there is a lot of thinking and story behind a lot of your pieces, and I think that’s wonderful.
You really care about your subject matter, and you’re not just this machine that draws, so that’s fantastic and that’s another thing that I don’t see very often. I think often times when students are applying to art school, they get really really caught up in just the pure technical skill, and they don’t really think about what it is that they’re trying to talk about, if they’re trying to communicate an idea. That’s great that you’re really thinking about those things.
Art schools are really looking to see that you have an openness and willingness to really work in a wide range of different kinds of materials, and I definitely see that in your portfolio. You have a three-dimensional piece, you’ve got many paintings, you’ve got drawings, a wood burned piece, you got some mixed media pieces…that’s fantastic, not only that you’ve really taken the time to experiment with all those materials, but that you’re quite accomplished in a lot of those areas.
And so it really shows your versatility as an artist, that you’re not an artist who only knows how to draw in pencil but that that you can use charcoal, you can use all these other different kinds of supplies, that’s really fantastic that you’re showing that in your portfolio.
Your compositional skills in terms of how you’re laying out your subject matter on the page are quite good. You have a couple of pieces that I think could be improved where there are some areas that look a little bit blank, but I think for the most part you really are tackling the entire surface of the piece, and that’s great because what I see very often is people get so focused on the subject, and then they have this blank background, and the piece ends up looking really unfinished and empty.”